Month: September 2016

Literally response

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These are reasons how melody changes in the book out of my mind

 

Melody goes to Mrs. Valencia’s almost every day “so most work days i’d end up in Mrs Valencia’s place for a couple of hours”

 

REASON 2!

 

Melody has a baby sister named penny because “penny was born perfect and copper penny”

 

REASON 3!

 

Melody gets a new dog named ButterScotch because of the color of his fur “I pointed to the candy bowl”

 

 

These were reasons why i liked the ways the author makes Melody change in the book “Out of my Mind”

Writing About reading paragraph response outline

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Here are some things that i like about the Author of “Out of my Mind”

 

I like that the author used sensory language that is funny and emotional. “step fart step fart.”

 

It sounds real because it is realistic fiction. “I can’t walk I can’t talk.”

 

It is 1st person so it makes you feel like you’re Melody in a way. “I can’t walk i can’t talk.”

 

These were the things that i liked about the book “Out of my Mind’